Reading a few people on my f-list who always have interesting things to say about writing, I was moved to reread Dorothy Bryant’s Writing a Novel (I always want to call her Dorothy Allison, who is another person altogether). Not all of it works for me, but I find it interesting and sometimes motivating. For today “Remember that detailed planning is of great value, but only if you understand that it does not work. By that I mean you cannot expect your careful planning to solve in advance many of the problems you will run into while writing, nor help you avoid making changes you must make. It is through the writing itself that you learn what you are trying to write. You write some of it, and it’s not quite right, but the process of writing sets deep forces in motion. (That’s why if you miss a day you feel as if getting started again is like moving mountains.) These deep forces shift you to a new place, slightly closer to what you can write. Day by day, as you write, everything keeps shifting and changing under your hands. The plan helps in this process, but only if you are ready to deviate from it as you begin to see your direction more clearly.”
From my favorite singer, not a song this time but a game livestream (from last summer sometime). Unlike Liu Chang, Jiang Dunhao does not do livestreams on the regular (“I never know what to say”), so this is a bit of an exception. He’s playing a game called inZoi? which seems to be a kind of slice-of-life? in a city where they speak an annoyingly random language? and makes himself an avatar wearing one of his own typical striped shirts (with a lot of cute little “Nope!”s in English when he doesn’t like the options presented). It’s not all that exciting to watch, but like Liu Chang’s game livestreams, excellent for listening practice, since his narration reflects what’s happening on screen, plus the style of the game means there are a lot of everyday words coming up. (The first thing he does is go to the karaoke box on the game map, where he is somewhat appalled to find that his avatar sings really badly.)
(okay, I lied, here’s a song too, even though I think I’ve already posted this one: 掉了, just because it blows my mind every time.)
For work reasons, I came across this list of large cardinal properties (I don’t even know what cardinals are, other than cardinal-versus-ordinal, not counting the religious ones and the red birds) and found it extremely delightful. I know for math people, including those on my f-list, it must make actual sense, but I just like the existence of worldly cardinals, weakly and strongly inaccessible cardinals (need to apply this categorization to the local authorities, utilities companies, etc.), unfoldable cardinals, shrewd cardinals, almost and totally ineffable cardinals, ethereal cardinals, subtle cardinals, remarkable cardinals, almost high jump cardinals, super almost huge cardinals, and so on.
Antonia Forest fans may be amused to note that there’s a kid called Juki at the Saturday juku; also another boy called Mokuren, a very pretty name which means “magnolia” (I haven’t seen the characters but presumably it’s 木蓮, although these days you never know). Some of the modern kira-kira names I find too much, as in the previous post, but at least it’s more interesting than everyone being named Hiroshi or Daisuke or Keiko or Miyuki (depending on the generation).
Still working my way through the Chinese edition of The People at No. 1 Siwei Street; the dialogue is very cute in Chinese. Seriously confusing myself because there’s a character who is mostly just called the landlady, 房东, but because I know there’s a landlady character, I keep looking at 大家 and wanting to read it that way (“landlord/-lady” in Japanese, “everyone” in Chinese). Also I can’t believe I now know how to say both “pillowfriend” and “fuckbuddy” in Chinese (床伴 and 炮友, if anyone cares); clearly I have made some fundamental mistake somewhere in my self-guided Chinese education.
More silly Chinese: People online using on-the-spot loan words written in hanzi, like 哦莫 (Korean “omo,” kind of “oy vey”) or 摩西摩西 (Japanese “moshi-moshi,” telephone hello doubling as “hey you, wake up there”).
When I need spare names for original Chinese characters (I mean, people, not letters) I have a secret weapon: searching for chorus or orchestra rosters in Chinese. The former usually separates members by voice part and the latter often comes with photos, making it easy both ways to check name gender, and there are lots and lots of names to mix-and-match first and last. Also interested that Western orchestra instruments seem to have multiple translations: for the contrabass I’ve mostly seen 低音提琴, low violin, but also 倍大提琴 which is literally “double bass” (or “double cello,” anyway). Also the 法国号, French horn, which also goes by 圆号, round horn; the cor anglais seems to be literally the 英国管 as well. The harp is 竖琴, vertical-stringed-instrument (琴 is the word for “zither” but can refer to anything with strings, the violin family as above is various 提琴s and even rock guitarists and bass players will refer casually to their axes as 琴 as well). Timpani are 定音鼓, fixed-tone drums.
Visit to Arima, a hot spring spa with centuries of history as a tourist destination (possibly millennia; the original hot spring visitors were gods, if you follow the local legend). Lots of cherry blossoms, because it’s in the mountains and they bloom later; steep hills everywhere (my knees are not in good shape right now and the hills were a challenge; does anybody have any good exercise ideas that are easy on the knees?); the “Jealousy Spring” said to puff out steam whenever a beautiful woman walks by; a local train using rolling stock from sixty years ago; soda-water senbei, which you’re supposed to eat within five seconds (literally) after they come off the griddle, because the first bite is chewy and after that they get crisp (they taste like old-fashioned fortune cookies); and of course the hot springs, notable for their copper-colored water, like bathing in a mud puddle but actually very clean and soothing (see here, not where we stayed but the photos are nice). (No wonder I’ve read at least one murder mystery in which the Arima waters are used to conceal an exsanguinated victim.)
Photos: Way too many cherry blossoms, mostly from Arima; I still maintain that they’re not my favorite flowers, but they sure are photogenic. Two cats: Koron-chan with an elegant little halo, and an offended stray at a safe distance. Some maples: the red leaves are not actually painted on the wall, they just look like it. Message on a mailbox that cracked me up. A bounty of kumquats going to waste because they’re growing on the train side of the railway fence, meaning nobody can pick them (I suppose the railway company could, but logistically it wouldn’t be easy). An alleyway in Arima and a temple entrance which looks like it’s off in the mountains somewhere but is actually right in the middle of my large city.
Be safe and well.
From my favorite singer, not a song this time but a game livestream (from last summer sometime). Unlike Liu Chang, Jiang Dunhao does not do livestreams on the regular (“I never know what to say”), so this is a bit of an exception. He’s playing a game called inZoi? which seems to be a kind of slice-of-life? in a city where they speak an annoyingly random language? and makes himself an avatar wearing one of his own typical striped shirts (with a lot of cute little “Nope!”s in English when he doesn’t like the options presented). It’s not all that exciting to watch, but like Liu Chang’s game livestreams, excellent for listening practice, since his narration reflects what’s happening on screen, plus the style of the game means there are a lot of everyday words coming up. (The first thing he does is go to the karaoke box on the game map, where he is somewhat appalled to find that his avatar sings really badly.)
(okay, I lied, here’s a song too, even though I think I’ve already posted this one: 掉了, just because it blows my mind every time.)
For work reasons, I came across this list of large cardinal properties (I don’t even know what cardinals are, other than cardinal-versus-ordinal, not counting the religious ones and the red birds) and found it extremely delightful. I know for math people, including those on my f-list, it must make actual sense, but I just like the existence of worldly cardinals, weakly and strongly inaccessible cardinals (need to apply this categorization to the local authorities, utilities companies, etc.), unfoldable cardinals, shrewd cardinals, almost and totally ineffable cardinals, ethereal cardinals, subtle cardinals, remarkable cardinals, almost high jump cardinals, super almost huge cardinals, and so on.
Antonia Forest fans may be amused to note that there’s a kid called Juki at the Saturday juku; also another boy called Mokuren, a very pretty name which means “magnolia” (I haven’t seen the characters but presumably it’s 木蓮, although these days you never know). Some of the modern kira-kira names I find too much, as in the previous post, but at least it’s more interesting than everyone being named Hiroshi or Daisuke or Keiko or Miyuki (depending on the generation).
Still working my way through the Chinese edition of The People at No. 1 Siwei Street; the dialogue is very cute in Chinese. Seriously confusing myself because there’s a character who is mostly just called the landlady, 房东, but because I know there’s a landlady character, I keep looking at 大家 and wanting to read it that way (“landlord/-lady” in Japanese, “everyone” in Chinese). Also I can’t believe I now know how to say both “pillowfriend” and “fuckbuddy” in Chinese (床伴 and 炮友, if anyone cares); clearly I have made some fundamental mistake somewhere in my self-guided Chinese education.
More silly Chinese: People online using on-the-spot loan words written in hanzi, like 哦莫 (Korean “omo,” kind of “oy vey”) or 摩西摩西 (Japanese “moshi-moshi,” telephone hello doubling as “hey you, wake up there”).
When I need spare names for original Chinese characters (I mean, people, not letters) I have a secret weapon: searching for chorus or orchestra rosters in Chinese. The former usually separates members by voice part and the latter often comes with photos, making it easy both ways to check name gender, and there are lots and lots of names to mix-and-match first and last. Also interested that Western orchestra instruments seem to have multiple translations: for the contrabass I’ve mostly seen 低音提琴, low violin, but also 倍大提琴 which is literally “double bass” (or “double cello,” anyway). Also the 法国号, French horn, which also goes by 圆号, round horn; the cor anglais seems to be literally the 英国管 as well. The harp is 竖琴, vertical-stringed-instrument (琴 is the word for “zither” but can refer to anything with strings, the violin family as above is various 提琴s and even rock guitarists and bass players will refer casually to their axes as 琴 as well). Timpani are 定音鼓, fixed-tone drums.
Visit to Arima, a hot spring spa with centuries of history as a tourist destination (possibly millennia; the original hot spring visitors were gods, if you follow the local legend). Lots of cherry blossoms, because it’s in the mountains and they bloom later; steep hills everywhere (my knees are not in good shape right now and the hills were a challenge; does anybody have any good exercise ideas that are easy on the knees?); the “Jealousy Spring” said to puff out steam whenever a beautiful woman walks by; a local train using rolling stock from sixty years ago; soda-water senbei, which you’re supposed to eat within five seconds (literally) after they come off the griddle, because the first bite is chewy and after that they get crisp (they taste like old-fashioned fortune cookies); and of course the hot springs, notable for their copper-colored water, like bathing in a mud puddle but actually very clean and soothing (see here, not where we stayed but the photos are nice). (No wonder I’ve read at least one murder mystery in which the Arima waters are used to conceal an exsanguinated victim.)
Photos: Way too many cherry blossoms, mostly from Arima; I still maintain that they’re not my favorite flowers, but they sure are photogenic. Two cats: Koron-chan with an elegant little halo, and an offended stray at a safe distance. Some maples: the red leaves are not actually painted on the wall, they just look like it. Message on a mailbox that cracked me up. A bounty of kumquats going to waste because they’re growing on the train side of the railway fence, meaning nobody can pick them (I suppose the railway company could, but logistically it wouldn’t be easy). An alleyway in Arima and a temple entrance which looks like it’s off in the mountains somewhere but is actually right in the middle of my large city.
Be safe and well.


















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Date: 2026-04-14 10:38 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2026-04-14 12:01 pm (UTC)This is the whole problem with AI. I don't want a shit draft done by someone else. Doing my own shit draft reveals problems that my head will quietly sort out by itself by the time I get back to rewrite it. (speaking as translator not writer but surely the same applies).
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2026-04-14 12:33 pm (UTC)Oof, yes, I feel this!
I now know how to say both “pillowfriend” and “fuckbuddy” in Chinese (床伴 and 炮友, if anyone cares)
Thank you, I feel very educated now. *g*
People online using on-the-spot loan words written in hanzi, like 哦莫 (Korean “omo,” kind of “oy vey”) or 摩西摩西 (Japanese “moshi-moshi,” telephone hello doubling as “hey you, wake up there”).
I love this kind of thing! Thank you for sharing!
The hot springs look gorgeous. And cherry blossoms are definitely lovely. ♥
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:42 pm (UTC)I aim to please! ;)
and glad you appreciated the silly words and the cherry blossoms! <3
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Date: 2026-04-14 12:34 pm (UTC)*makes note to self* 😅
哦莫 (Korean “omo,” kind of “oy vey”) or 摩西摩西 (Japanese “moshi-moshi,” telephone hello doubling as “hey you, wake up there”)
I love that!
Beautiful photos! I love the cherry blossoms and the red maple leaves. The alleyway is wonderfully atmospheric. ♥ That's a shame about the kumquats. A co-worker just made kumquat marmalade from the kumquats growing near our office, and it was delicious.
*adds another livestream to my watchlist*
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:43 pm (UTC)Kumquat marmalade is fantastic! My partner made it two or three times this winter, from his dad's kumquat bush which was having a bumper year, and we got quite addicted to it.
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Date: 2026-04-14 04:21 pm (UTC)Idk why but the middle photo of the last row really speaks to me 🧡
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:44 pm (UTC)bookmarked, thank you!
and I'm glad you liked the alley, I found it an evocative view.
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Date: 2026-04-14 05:01 pm (UTC)Oh, I like this. And it is true, at least for me this is how it works best.
And so many pretty pics here. But my reaction was mainly: pretty kitty, yay! Oh, and there's another pretty kitty. :DDD
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Date: 2026-04-14 11:37 pm (UTC)I love the cardinals too.
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Date: 2026-04-15 09:14 am (UTC)I always care haha and I'm very much on the side of acquiring random words in the chaotic self-study process (even if I will forget in 2 days)
For knee-friendly exercises, I'm a total homebody so I do a lot of short and un-challenging at-home yoga. And sometimes short and un-challenging at-home pilates. The idea is to activate the muscles around my knees. Anecdotal, but this did help the minor knee sensitivity I got from the phase in my life when I tried getting into running hahahhaa. Maybe biking since you're the more outdoorsy sort? Or swimming, I heard that's good for you but I'm so bad at it I somehow hurt my back when I try. 😂
because the first bite is chewy and after that they get crisp (they taste like old-fashioned fortune cookies)
this sounds so fun, I feel like I'd burn myself though haha
Jealous of your cherry blossoms, as someone who doesn't get them. The maples are so red!!!
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:52 pm (UTC)*handshake* good to hear :)
and thanks for knee suggestions! I am thinking about swimming, the public pool near us just reopened again...and maybe I'll look for the pilates thing too?
this sounds so fun, I feel like I'd burn myself though haha
no, they give you the senbei in a little paper wrapper and it's not so hot you burn your mouth! All safe.
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Date: 2026-04-15 10:05 am (UTC)Arima looks fantastic.
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Date: 2026-04-15 12:53 pm (UTC)Arima is really lovely, I don't know why it took me so long to visit when I've lived here for so long.
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Date: 2026-04-15 10:55 pm (UTC)I really like that Bryant quote, that's certainly how it works for me and it's always helpful to have a reminder that you cannot shortcut anything when it comes to writing. Must pick up the book some time.
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Date: 2026-04-16 02:07 pm (UTC)The Bryant book is on openlibrary.org, I find. I don't know if you would find it helpful or not but it's an interesting read. (Published in 1978, which means this paragraph made me laugh: "Yes, at last I can give you one definite, universal rule for writing. Ready? Don't make additions and changes in the margin or on the back of the page. Cut and splice, rather than scribble and squeeze in, your changes. This method prolongs the time you can work on this version, before you have to type a clean copy just to be able to see what you are doing." Even universal rules give way to technology...)
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Date: 2026-04-17 02:40 pm (UTC)I really liked the entire quote you chose. I've been thinking along these lines lately, especially in the context of the structural edits I've been preparing. Like, there's a lot of "couldn't I do all this work before writing the first draft next time? Wouldn't it be easier?" but even with robust outlining, there's so much that only became clear once I was actually writing, so much that changed, and other things that seemed like they would be important and turned out not to be. I guess having a map, even if you deviate, even if you decide on a different destination before the end, is still incredibly helpful. I don't think I had heard about that book before, even though I collected too many writing books over the decades and keep meaning to reread them. I'll have to add this one to the list!
The pictures are lovely, and the visit to Arima also sounds great! 😍
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Date: 2026-04-19 01:36 am (UTC)You said it, honestly (like the "how do I know what I think until I hear what I say?" lady, it really works like that). Quoting from my comment above: The Bryant book is on openlibrary.org, I find. I don't know if you would find it helpful or not but it's an interesting read. (Published in 1978, which means this paragraph made me laugh: "Yes, at last I can give you one definite, universal rule for writing. Ready? Don't make additions and changes in the margin or on the back of the page. Cut and splice, rather than scribble and squeeze in, your changes. This method prolongs the time you can work on this version, before you have to type a clean copy just to be able to see what you are doing." Even universal rules give way to technology...)
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Date: 2026-04-19 02:32 pm (UTC)Very very true. :D Everyone does writing differently, but this seems to hold true for me, definitely.
I now know how to say both “pillowfriend” and “fuckbuddy” in Chinese (床伴 and 炮友, if anyone cares); clearly I have made some fundamental mistake somewhere in my self-guided Chinese education.
*takes notes* :D This seems to me to be the entirely right way to learn Chinese. :D
I’ve read at least one murder mystery in which the Arima waters are used to conceal an exsanguinated victim.
Hahaaa! :D We have one like that in the mountains where I grew up, too, but sadly not hot! :D (I think the color is not from copper but moor, but same diff?) Also, maybe I've read too few local murder mysteries, but I'm sure there must be some. The water is indeed very red.
Cherriiiiies! <3
p.s.: I'm sure you've got exercise recs, but in case not, let me know. My own is very short and for core strength and you don't need your knees for that much at all.
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Date: 2026-04-20 09:51 am (UTC)I appreciate the encouragement! ;)
(I think the color is not from copper but moor, but same diff?)
I think technically the Arima springs' color comes from iron, which oxidizes when it hits the air...or something like that...? I didn't pay too much attention to the explanation lol. It's a pity yours isn't hot, hot springs are the best.
Would be grateful for exercise recs! poke me when you have a free moment, either here or on Discord.
<3